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LeadDogma
2005-09-10
ch 1,
abuseThere definatly is some potential here. You should try and break away from the Miserble and Regretful cliches most commonly used by hormonal teenagers. i'll check in at a later date to See if you updated.

LeadDogma.
Morbid Maxwell
2005-05-18
ch 1,
abuseThe comparison was rather interesting, I liked it though, it was unique...I like that word... XD But you did wonderful again...yet, I'm sorry to hear all these bad things happened to you...

Morbid Maxwell- Come to the darkside, we've got yaoi!
you are not you
2004-05-14
ch 1,
abuseI like this. I especially like the references to Morrisey. Good job.
FxC
April Thursday
Rachel Faith A. Teknoman 33...
2004-05-14
ch 1,
abuseInteresting, and somehow I can relate.
Only one question - who is Sylvia?
-Rachel Faith A. Teknoman
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