...wow. this was poweful. your use of repetition was effective and portrayed how, if one has love, he/she can be invincible. nice job!

not to much of a friend if they do that

Wow, Roxy. A poet, too? You and I have more in common than I thought! I finally made it to your stories. I was wondering if I could post your To Love and Lost story in my forum? I rather like it and know of others who would LOVE to read it. v-n.n. This poem is wonderful, too. May I post it, as well?

Coolie! I really like it! Is that about Tommy? If it is I will hurt him!

this is kinda a dark nursery rhyme lol, to me anyway. It's just me. It's cool, this piece. :O)
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