I really like fish imagery. As in in general. you have done a good job of appealing to your audience. you've caught me like fish. i'm hooked and all that etc,etc,..

why didn't I discover you until now? you're amazing. beyond amazing. I loved this.

Ah, goodness, I've gotten incredibly behind on reviewing your poetry. . .
The way you set up this poem is stunning. Each of the stories, obviously, fit perfectly with your 'prompt' of sorts, and the fact that you took it three different ways gives it a delicately expansive feel.
Also, your diction is gorgeously woven; in my head, I can't help but think they have a soft, tendrilling quality to them.
Beautifully euphonic poem :)

i think that this is a very impressive write. it has a unique style and a strong voice. good job.
i hope you will take some time to review some of my work as well.

Applause, no words to describe the beauty of this poem. b^^d Please R&R my fic, "Zodiac Vanguard" or the poems to go with it. I worship your poetry.
~Nymph

beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I loved this, just loved it