Very good...I especially like the last line of the first stanza. Of the three poems of yours I've read so far, this one is definitely my favorite.

dang, thats definitaly tragic, very well written. I like it tho its sad to think that you got put thro pain like that.
~Diane

I usually don't review, manly because I'm a lazy bint. However, I read this and I can completely relate to the first stanza (not so much the second). So, I thought you should be told what a beautifully written poem this is, and a wonderful topic ^_^.

Wow again! Still awesome work!
If you're looking for some kind of crit, I would say that 'The void in my chest is unnoticed' doesn't quite match with the rest of the poem. Maybe 'They don't notice the void in my chest' would work better. I don't know. That's just me. Other than that, this poem is great!

I do like the way that was written; you elaborated on it enough to make your point, but kept it simple.
Umm..suggestions...
The meter is slightly off in a couple of places, tho its not at ALL bad. For example, "yet me irises are hollow caves" doesn't flow so well. Something like, "and yet my eyes are hollow caves" woudl fix the meter problem. Tho I really like the word "iris", so keep that. Also, the line, "They know not I'm tied" is a little awkward and slightly confusing. What do you mean by "you're tied"?
But those are all little things, and overall the poem is quite nice. Good job:)

I love those last 2 lines. They are a perfect fit for the poem. It just goes to show that people do not always know you as well as they may think...and that goes for everyone. Well done.