Interesting, and pretty good.

Wow, thats deep, kinda scary but its good.
~Diane (old screen-name)

I love the setup of this poem, how the first line is a good thing, and the second is darker. This might actually be my favorite of your poems...

I love this poem to death, though it might be just my fascination with twisting holy things evil. The whole alternating lines thing is nice, as is the repeated chorus part thing.
Wonderful job.