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| Death by Night 2004-07-15 ch 1,  | abuseOoh haunting... I loved it though. I thought it was cool how you had SETH in every stanza, though it took me a minute to get what you meant, 'cause I'm a little slow. Very cool though. Keep writing, ~DBN |
| Elbereth141 2004-07-14 ch 1, | abusesad... Really well written! loved it! |
| The Canines 2004-06-11 ch 1, | abuseI love the flow, and the idea. Too sad for me *cries* Great job! --Lykess "The Canines" |
| Sadexcuse4amango 2004-06-02 ch 1, | abuseWoah... Way 'clispe! Very well written! You should make a song... XD Was cool how you had his name scrambled throughout the Stanza too, I'd die trying to pull that off... lol! ^_^ |
| Seeker of the Way 2004-05-31 ch 1, | abuseThis works on MULTIPLE levels .. yAy yAy and one more yAy for you! |
| A Beautiful Nightmare 2004-05-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is really cool... well done... |
| Sang Yu Nung 2004-05-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was GREAT! Sad and it feels a bit detached from the world, like it hasn't completely sunken in- like lots of people are sometimes... good rhyming! :-) Keep up the great work! |