I don't think this chapter was too much. This is a good story, like all your others. You are an excellent writer!

Great story

Wow! Poor Karen! I wonder if Karen and Kevin will end up together? Why Alex is interest in Karen? I wonder who is the killer? I hope Kevin will be there and be with her in case. Hurry update soon.

OMG! I can't wait for more!

This is a really good story so far. There are a couple of spelling mistakes earlier on, but the rest seems very much up to scratch.

I love the involvement between Karen and Kevin. I just hope that everything works out - though not too easily I hope. I think a little bit more drama needs to happen before they finally get to be together. Keep up the suspense and the romance.

~Silver

can you update soon?

:) Fun. Can't wait to see what's next!

< 3 Update,

Renzie

the word is 'dying,' not 'dieing.' you could use a beta reader, or at least spell check.

GOOD GRIEF

What's "Brie" going to do now? She's definately taking risks. Oh well it makes the story more interesting, I love this story and like all of your stories it has great characters, keep at it

Tabs

ops!! the timing of jose was was! update soon

phone calls in middle of things, hate that! i wonder what will happen next :D

hehe..this was so sweet. i love kevin... :D

uh oh, wonder whats gonna happend, updat e as soon as possible!

freaky, I don't like that Alex guy, he erks me the wrong way. Womans intuition i guess. oh well update soon.