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mspotts 2008-09-06 ch 29,	abusethis a riduculously amazing story! One of my absolute favourites on this site. It was fantastic - the characters were real, the plot addictive and, call me crazy, I can't help but love Lure. I can't wait to read the sequel!
Paradigm08 2008-08-25 ch 29,	abuseI simply adore this story. It's quite embarrassing but I will admit that I've read this story a few more times than I can count. Lure is fantastic and their relationship is so addicting. Well done!
Duuude 2008-08-16 ch 29,	abuseWell... that was different. And very, very unexpected. Honestly, I thought this would be like all the other stories I've read. She'd make him human, he'd love her and all would be well. Sadly, this was not the case. But oddly enough, I still enjoyed. You know what I did expect though? I knew she would end up killing him at one point because I wanted to kill so badly myself. Plus, it was the only way things could be semi-normal. I think it's better she's in a mental institution because come on? How could someone be normal after ALL that? Matt almost raping her, dying, almost raping her and dying AGAIN. Her grandfather dying because of her. Living with a demon that was BEYOND psycho and being in love with said demon. Then killing that same demon and THEN watching yourself murder your best friend and having no control over it... ANYONE would go crazy. The story was VERY well written. I could not turn away from it. That's why I basically read the entire thing in one go. Maybe I'm crazy too? XD But anyway, this was really good. Not a happy ending but a great ending indeed. Especially when he asked for her last wish again at the end... I guess the moral of the story is, you can't change a demon...? Or maybe that love is most definitely blind.. Maybe even that not every story has a happy ending because this was NOT what I'd call a happy ending. I'm kind of sad for her. In fact, I'm really sad for her. All she wanted was a normal, nice life where she didn't feel alone or unwanted. But when she did get attention, it was ALL wrong. And weirdly enough, he actually did love her. Crazy in love? haha. GREAT story. This is going into my faves for sure. Loved it. =)
Chocolate.and.sushi 2008-08-08 ch 28,	abuseI absolutely love this story although I passionately hate Lure. I'm starting to think he's not real and that Kat truly is mental. Throughout this entire story I have been flooded with different emotions because of your writing. You are a great writer for being able to do that. I am so happy to have read this story. Thank you so much for sharing your writing and imagination!
Chocolate.and.sushi 2008-08-08 ch 25,	abuseWhoa, Lure is getting so out of hand. I can't believe Kat has fallen for him. I was rooting for them to get together in the beginning but Lure is just so...wrong. Ahh I can't believe I'm stressing so much over this story. I am so addicted to it!
Chocolate.and.sushi 2008-08-08 ch 14,	abuseOh my gosh, Lure can be so scary and possessive and whiny! I love your writing, I almost freaked out at that wing-sprouting scene!
Chocolate.and.sushi 2008-08-08 ch 9,	abuseHahaha I love Lure!
Chocolate.and.sushi 2008-08-08 ch 3,	abuseWow! I love the direction this story is going!
Chocolate.and.sushi 2008-08-08 ch 1,	abuseI already LOVE this story. Itis VERY well-written and the characters are well developed. I can feel for Kat when she imagined Matt being stabbed by knives and having salt poured over the wounds. I'm hooked onto this story!
xSabe 2008-08-07 ch 28,	abusewow. I have no words. Keept me up for a night and didn't move from the computer the next morning. Wowwowowow. LOVED IT.
allhailthesporks 2008-08-05 ch 28,	abuseHoly freak. Holy effing freak. That was pretty mind-blowing. I felt completely sick for loving Lure. I think I still do... Yeah. Mind-blowing.
Today 2008-08-04 ch 29, anon.	abusePerfect song for your story is Today-Jefferson Airplane. The song talks about love but in a very creepy way. Anyway, great story :]. It really took me to another place. And it had a great ending!
iJAN. 2008-07-27 ch 29,	abuseMy friend printed out the whole thing and I finished it quickly. I love everything from top to bottom. The plot you thought to make this one of a kind story is very unique and original, and the way you write is hell awesome! I'll be reading the next single in a bit and I can't wait to see what's in store! My friend also told me you'll be publishing this and that's good to hear! Good luck, okay?
McShortShort 2008-07-24 ch 28,	abuseahah i love this ending
SyMph0Ny Of cOloRS 2008-07-20 ch 1,	abuseI love this story. It was one of those stories that i didn't want to end. The sequel is nice. Could you pweaase R&R my story? Its about how a entrance exam to high school changes 4 girls...forever.

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