kind of depressing, but i like it.

Aww... this just really sucks. All (and I mean ALL) of my favourite stories have been taken down from this site and I've been a reader for over 3 years now. This was actually the first story that I read too. I really do hope I'll find some of them published one day. Good luck with getting this published!

This story brought me to tears because it reminded me when I was tormented by a boy everyday at school. I'm completley awed.
You made it seem so real that for a moment I imagined myself as Kat. She's strong and everything I want to be.
Thank you.

hey what the heck is happening around here? why are all the good stories being removed?! i'm new here.

it was a really cool story so far
but why have the chapters suddenly gotten so short??

Im just wandering why the chapters were really short and they left me pretty confused.

oh i am so lucky i read your stories a long time ago!
but that must really suck, well you are a really good author and i hope you do get published, you know what they say 'don't let an ass get in the way'...that quote was from a dieting program, well you get the pun.

What a disgusting, amazing story.

Wow, what an awesome story! I read the whole thing, very interesting. I liked the ending; I'm not a fan of entirely happy endings. They're very unrealistic. Anywho, I'm off to read the sequel. Update soon!

BTW, can you check out my story Lupus, and leave some feedback? It's nothing like this story and nowhere near as good as it, but you may like it.

DS02

no offense but this story has to be the most sadistic story that i have ever read. i know that flames are never appreciated and that i didnt have to read the whole story if i didnt want to but i wanted to know how it ended. and i think that both of the main characters are pshcopaths (sorry i cant spell)
charlotte

what does the titles mean? are they in english? (i doubt it is)

Holy freaking shit.
Those were the few words popping up into my head as soon as I finished this story. It was so captivating that I refused to let go of this story until I finished it-which was at 2:15in the morning. Lure is slightly strange- yes. From having mood swings, to attempting to being nice and then possesive. But one thing rather irritating was the fact that she constantly let everyone boss her around and she herself is totally selfish and screwed up. But overall, it seems like he's just psychotic. I mean, really- how did you come up with the idea of this kind of a story? Just wow..But seriously- all in all, this had seriously been one of the best and unexpected stories that I've read on this website.

whats up with all the complicated chapter names?

Dark but not all dark. A weird dark too, lure is like a feisty cat, like a kitten more than kat. Tony is, well tony. I like him. The grandpa is extreme haha, like unrealistically extreme... the family doesnt even mind.. but i guess kat did say that he twisted the family so that they wouldnt care anymore, but still weird that he is so cruel... there are still some grammar errors though O_O i dont like how kat keeps asking herself, silly questions about lure. she is quite naive i mean to the point of sillyness sometimes, there are also a few inconsistencies in the story. but generally it is quite good since u are a young writer.

She said in an ealier chap that he had never called her by name before (katlyn) but he had, the very first time they met.
The story is infuriating, she can never get what she wants!