what do Oni Safaia-Chan Neko and Chibi mean in Chinese or w/e? I mean I'm not obsessed with anime and so forth, so I don't know what any of these things mean. Care to elaborate?

Oh my goodness. Ergnol died...I was like "yay"But now it's like - hey he was the only one left who could hold back the night creatures, so even if it's kinda sorta good for Ergnol to be dead - then again it's kinda sorta not good.Now what's gonna happen?I wonder; I wonder...Uri Tyoka (btw - don't know if I've said so or not yet, but I absolutely love that name) better come save everyone - he's the hero, is he not?Universe in chaos, help, help, we need help! ...hehe~blush~I think I got a little over excited there.Guess that tells ya how good it is, huh?hehe...I be leaving now.Laterz~Reda~

Wow it's getting even better the longer it gets! I didn't think it could get any better - that's just...wow...I'm impressed, Neko. One thing I would like to point out - my favorite line in all these chapters is "A single snowflake is always joined by others." The conversation Uri had with Reoj in an earlier chapter, and then bringing that line back in this chapter...I love it.^^Laterz~Reda~

I like this. It's got an air of mystery about it that few things I've read here have. Good descriptions, enough to give an image of the characters and setting but not slowing 'action' pace. The names are good. I know it's unusual but it's important that main characters have good names, and yours do, they sound like runes.It's interesting. I'm going to read some more.

I love your work! Absolutely love it! ^^Though, it is kind of hard to read this chapter without the indications between scene-switches, but you explained that. Still, the sooner you feel like going back to fix that, the better because, even though it was one of your best chapters it - it's kinda hard to read straight through and stopping and wondering 'now, where am i?'Still, I love it, and I wish for more.Laterz~Reda~

Wow.
Nice chapter - seriously. Nice chapter. (If I could put "nice" in italics, I would, 'cause it was that awesome.)
um..
Anyway...
comments.
This chapter seems to explain a lot of what's been going on - I mean, it's more clear and easier to understand at least part of the situation here.
And it's only beginning? Whoa.
I can't wait for your next update.
It's sure to be a great one!
Now...I have a few hours...I should get to writing...
Laterz -
~Reda~

Hi! I've taken too long to do this review. Anyway, kind of a broken-up chapter, this one, though I don't think it's necessarily bad. It slows down the pace, though, and there's a lot of built up tension. I'm set to wondering what these demons are all about - I like your use of short syntax, by the way, it makes for a disjointed but ominous read.
"Her eyes. They scared the wind.." I LOVED this entire section, possibly my favourite part of the chapter. It was amazing, really original.
Also, it was nice to have some information about magic and the night creatures etc, you worked that in well. And lots of mysterious information about Ino!! *dramatic humming*
- sofi x
'humanly shadow' - this should be 'human-shaped', or 'humanoid'. Humanly means 'by any means', as in 'whatever is humanly possible'

Hey!
I told ya I'd read it, didn't I?
Wow.
Lots of stuff going on.
A little confusing at parts, but all the mysterious-ness add to the suspense so...
Update soon cause I wanna know exactly what's going on and what's going to happen next!
Oh! And...Uri's cool. ^^
~Reda~

Okay... this is complicated. Your prose is great, no grammar errors that I could spot, either. ^_^ I'm a little confused about the passage of time here, though- how long was Ino a nurse after she jumped from Earth? And why do they all use swords when I've seen evidence of more advanced technology?
Very ominous talk about those diseases... and I wonder who Ino is, since she isn't affected...? Not great that Uri's father is possessed... y'know, I feel a little sorry for him. It's not his fault he's insane... :P And I'm curious to find out what those monsters were talking about.
Update soon!
And thanks for reviewing Null.
- sofi x

Well that was mysterious... Very interesting, though. Uri's impatient- I like that ^_^. Hmm... spooky magick tht Uri's messing around with there... so why can he speak the runes? How do you learn them in the first place?
Well, onto the next chapter!
- sofi x

Wow. This was another great chapter by the one and only Neko...
I thought there was, like, one awkward part: Where Ino and Uri were in that room with the sword...it was confusing at first, but yeah. So yeah.

Nice.
I loved the detail and the word usage in this chapter. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
-Chibi

Good going! I like your characters. Maybe going just a little bit slower on the descriptons would help people understand the surroundings and make it easier to picture. (Believe me, this is the hard part of writing, as I still have to work on it.) I really like the concept, the originality of the plot line. A little more mystery/suspense would be nice, but I'm sure that'll come in later. Update as soon as it is conveninent (ok, I know I must have spelled that horribly wrong; it doesn't look right). I want more and I'm putting you on my fav. author's list so I'll actually know when you update this story. Which reminds me...I have another story of yours to read, don't I? ^_^ heh. So many stories, so little time.
~Reda~

Wow. That was really good, Neko. I really liked the inspiration from Bartimaues [since that is also a great story].
Very well-written, and very original.

W00t! Great start, Neko-chan. Again, a few awkward bits, but beyond that it's very captivating and easy to get into. Slow down your explanations, though! Don't let us know what's hapenning immediately; leave us a little suspense, here! ^_~
~Oni