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Morbid Maxwell
2005-05-18
ch 1,
abuseI live in my own world, because it's full of...well I don't know actually...it's sorta dark and I can't seem to move much... XD

Morbid Maxwell- "You sound like a boy about to have an **..."
Xenila Poe
2004-05-15
ch 1,
abuseHmm, that was interesting. I wrote something similar to this once. I can definitly relate.As far as the poem, the rhythum was a little patchy,the beginning was better than the end. But the message of the poem was clear. Nice Job.
forbidden passion
2004-05-15
ch 1,
abusedamn you better see me again."fluuffy fluffy i was depressed and de de doo" i love your voice!
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