i have to say, jason comes off rather heartless about his friend's death and pushing michelle.

this looks good

but wot append 2 ryan n lyk wot was her last q 2 him

Wow. You've written an insane amount of stuff! I read Crave for Mistakes when you posted it (any chance of an update soon?). Then forgot about you, but it looks like I'll be back around to read some of the rest of this! yay!

Great story!! I wish the ending hadn't come so quickly, but I still loved it. I should try and keep an eye out for your next story. I hope it focuses more on Michelle and Jason's points of view again.

Just something that I'd like to point out that I've noticed in a lot of your stories is that you confuse "quiet" with "quite". "Quiet" = 'making no noise or sound, especially no disturbing sound', whereas "quite" = 'to a considerable extent or degree'. Very often you say "quite" instead of "quiet", which you mean. (I hope that wasn't too confusing).

Good luck with your other stories.

~Silver

I loved the whole story! You so have to do a sequal!

--M

Finally, I got a chance to read this, lol. What happened to Ryan? I can't wait for the next story. Great ending.

hey girl...i wonder what happens to ryan?...yeah where is he?...well can't believe its the ends already...nice story...so loving it...very good ending too...

Great chapter, great story. Love it!

Uh... what happened to ryan?

Very awesome especially the twist...God loves you!

>__< a decidedly worthy love story with considerably much ust between jason and michelle. but its nice and mushh...

however, i think you could spice your your stories by alot if you included more descriptions and more conversations.

and...wouldnt you think jordan is a little too.. violent and over reactive towards a criminal for a policewoman?

anyway, good job. keep writing your other stories.

Love It!! update soon pls..

Good story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Yay! A rescue team! Michelle may make it!