 ebonyheart 2004-05-26 . chapter 1a good poem, but thought you should know:
repeatedly not repeatidly
and then not than.
flows rather well, i quite like. |
 AlexKay 2004-05-23 . chapter 1Everything was really good. If anything, I'd say the very last line could use a little work. But that's pretty much it. |
 Kara Rose Trojan 2004-05-16 . chapter 1This is SO kick **! Seven thumbs up. I love the rhyming scheme and it actually says how you feel... By the way, I have posted new work since you were gone. Check it out! ^_^ |
 LiL Angel with Wings 2004-05-15 . chapter 1Pretty good. I like it. Admitting that your scared of something is always hard to do. Good Job! Keep it up!
LiL Angel with Wings
~ Dreamer to Fly ~ |