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ebonyheart 2004-05-26 . chapter 1
a good poem, but thought you should know:
repeatedly not repeatidly
and then not than.
flows rather well, i quite like.
AlexKay 2004-05-23 . chapter 1
Everything was really good. If anything, I'd say the very last line could use a little work. But that's pretty much it.
Kara Rose Trojan 2004-05-16 . chapter 1
This is SO kick **! Seven thumbs up. I love the rhyming scheme and it actually says how you feel... By the way, I have posted new work since you were gone. Check it out! ^_^
LiL Angel with Wings 2004-05-15 . chapter 1
Pretty good. I like it. Admitting that your scared of something is always hard to do. Good Job! Keep it up!
LiL Angel with Wings
~ Dreamer to Fly ~
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