That was very nice. Good job. :)

Col. Yeah Morrissey kicks hypothetical **.

hehe. I like it. this one seems...fun. big weird families are fun. okay, shutting up. but I really do like it.

nice start. I think it could have been better though if you'd continued the first chapter to make it a bit longer. *shrugs* it's your story. I'm just the reader.
Freedman

I eagerly await the next chapter.

I like, I like. It looks like this will be an interesting story. Even if it is in french, let me take a look, ne? I can understand some vague amount of the language, and if all else fails I'll force Aimee and Brian to translate for me.
~Sasa

Yha! New story. This is just as good as your others. Your such a good writer. I love stories about big families so musch can happen. Update soon please.