 jack c. weller 2004-08-10 . chapter 1It's a wish but not one that will come true in this way. Still, that doesn't mean this is a common desire. |
 keltica 2004-07-25 . chapter 1 Once again a beautiful and very expressive flow of words ...
keltica |
 Anglachel67 2004-05-31 . chapter 1Maybe...Usually I don't like that word, but you give it such hope, and feeling, that it gains meaning for me. Simply beautiful. |
 A. S. LeMay 2004-05-23 . chapter 1oh, i love it. Every sentence is important to the poem, i love this 'I'll wake to see that dreams are true and I am free.' |
 WarMachine 2004-05-16 . chapter 1I really liked it...haha..I love thinking that this is really a dream world..but I never get around to do anythign..cuz I rememember..this is reality..ahha..anwyas..yeah it is really good...short and very vivid |
 Jacqueline Howcis 2004-05-16 . chapter 1Oh i wish to wake and find my dreams have poured from my mind! :)
Feel free to check my work out, in fact please do! :)
Jac x |