wow...just wow. I never thought it could be done. I never in a million years invisioned a parody/satire like this, nazis, blood, gore, guns, violence. Everything was well done, I enjoyed it, and I hope you update or make a new story soon cause this was just too funny to not read twice. that's right, i read it twice, and not because i didn't grasp it the first time, it was 'cause it was so damn funny, yeah...i said it, whatcha gonna do know boy?

-Champ X

Wow this made study hall funny.

HA! This story is hilarious!

HAHAHAHA! I think that this story is just hilarious! You know that I am in my computer class reading this and everyone is staring at me because I was laughing hysterically *blushes* Very good job, are you gonna update? Please?~Savetheplanet :)

hmm.. intresting. heh. And I just saw the new Charlie and the Choco Factory yesterday! Misuer Depp looks like Micheal Jackson! muwahaha!! *cough cough* Evil little orange men of d00m! 73h p41n, 17 k1ll5 u5! Or rather, the stupid kid who wanted to see how they put the peanutbutter in the chocolate is killed... Oh well.

i like the rhyme in the song! heh heh hhe. lots of gore at the end. a little straqnge, but good all the same. well done.

I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I LOVE IT! Did I mention I love it? Yeah. I love it. LOVE

... it. Love it.

Wow. Interesting. In a good way. *speechless*

LOL! I love the Oompa-Loompa song...WE'RE GONNA BEAT THE ** OUTTA YOU!! LMFAO. Great job.

What a sick, twisted version of Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory. But good, in that same sick, twisted way. I've seen the actual movie too many times, and i hate it.

Ever notice how often the shades of laugh-your-**-of humor and blood-and-gut-spilling violence seemto coincide? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, er, i mean, ew!

...*opens mouth*...*stands there with mouth open* ...uh...will there be a sequeal?

Disturbing and yet strangly amusing. O_O I shall be haunted. Maybe.
~Miz. Moi~

kind of disturbing but still...heh heh i like the re-write of the oopa-loopa song. those thing are weird...

OMG I loved it I laughed, I cried...ok so I mostly laughed. Nazis..always funny. Any ways I loved it especially your oompa loompa song. Ha...ok well I'm finished rambiling. Are you gonna update. You could...kinda. Um...I'll shut up now.

That was hardcore, i liked the part when Gareycolmen was allike white people suck. Come over to Jerrits!