Long...chapters...but worth every minute reading them. ^_^

Great story.

Seems to be a great story so far, keep up the work.

hi! i'm so glad i came across your story because you and i are doing very similar things. i also have a manga/illustrated novel in the works, but my friends aren't the manga type so i've only gotten a small amount of feedback from fellow fictionpress authors and readers. i'd love to see some illustrations. do you have them on the web anywhere? also, would you mind glancing at my story? it's under my mokusei pen name, titled "journey." i also have illustrations up on a website that is given on my author page. great story, keep it up!!