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Reviews For: Final Thoughts

Lyralis
2006-04-26
ch 1,
abuseI like this Poem. Alot. I think You captured the feeling of being depressed without going over board with it.By the way,Thanks for the reviewXD
Yuri Fan
2005-01-11
ch 1,
abuseThis was really good. I think a lot of the wrong people kill themselves. Generally, most of the nicest and most interesting people i meet are the most depressed.
SleepDontWeep
2005-01-04
ch 1,
abusethis is the most talentedly written suicide poem that ive ever read.all suicide poems u read on this site seem to all morph into the same moaning and blood and pain but urs actually has a story explaining reason , having doubts, pondering about the unfortuanate afternath, everything is just so well though out and amazing!u obvoiusly have a talent, never stop writing!keep up d gud work!i love 'crimson sea of euphoria'.powerful! so powerful!!love and admiration Gretchen45xplease review my story 'Truly madly deeply' as itd mean alot! tanx x
Merideath Bailey
2004-08-01
ch 1,
abusei like it...sounds so real...i like the way you write.
-becca
No1LovesLizz
2004-07-28
ch 1,
abusethat was intense! but it was a good poem, even though it's about such a serious subject. I've written a couple about suicide, but i can't remember them or find them. But it was a good poem, i just hope the actions are fiction... :(
Lizz
jussanothergull
2004-07-27
ch 1,
abuseGood poem, I like the theme, but I think it would be better with a steadier rythm. Anyways, good job!
memories
2004-07-23
ch 1,
abuseI too thought i was watching her.. but mabye thats the way you wanted it. I really liked it towards the end, keep writing more x
Tk.T
2004-07-11
ch 1,
abuseGood. I like the imagery in this poem. And the meaning behind it is abstract and thought-provoking. I like how you rhymed. Very good! You should write more poems, this one was great!
Happy writing!
Tk.T~
Draugiks
2004-07-10
ch 1,
abusePitiful, just pitiful.
Oh, did you mean for it to be that way?
This poem made me feel as if I was watching this person, not feeling her. It just wasn't... evil enough... don't ask... you've got the depression, do you got the self-hate? Well, not as much. Though I congradulate you on the life-like experience, it still didn't make me feel as if I were in her shoes. Just watching her.
By the way, I like your style, how you write for yourself and not just for reviews. It isn't selfish. It's art.
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