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| Lyralis 2006-04-26 ch 1,  | abuseI like this Poem. Alot. I think You captured the feeling of being depressed without going over board with it.By the way,Thanks for the reviewXD |
| Yuri Fan 2005-01-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good. I think a lot of the wrong people kill themselves. Generally, most of the nicest and most interesting people i meet are the most depressed. |
| SleepDontWeep 2005-01-04 ch 1, | abusethis is the most talentedly written suicide poem that ive ever read.all suicide poems u read on this site seem to all morph into the same moaning and blood and pain but urs actually has a story explaining reason , having doubts, pondering about the unfortuanate afternath, everything is just so well though out and amazing!u obvoiusly have a talent, never stop writing!keep up d gud work!i love 'crimson sea of euphoria'.powerful! so powerful!!love and admiration Gretchen45xplease review my story 'Truly madly deeply' as itd mean alot! tanx x |
| Merideath Bailey 2004-08-01 ch 1, | abusei like it...sounds so real...i like the way you write. -becca |
| No1LovesLizz 2004-07-28 ch 1, | abusethat was intense! but it was a good poem, even though it's about such a serious subject. I've written a couple about suicide, but i can't remember them or find them. But it was a good poem, i just hope the actions are fiction... :( Lizz |
| jussanothergull 2004-07-27 ch 1, | abuseGood poem, I like the theme, but I think it would be better with a steadier rythm. Anyways, good job! |
| memories 2004-07-23 ch 1, | abuseI too thought i was watching her.. but mabye thats the way you wanted it. I really liked it towards the end, keep writing more x |
| Tk.T 2004-07-11 ch 1, | abuseGood. I like the imagery in this poem. And the meaning behind it is abstract and thought-provoking. I like how you rhymed. Very good! You should write more poems, this one was great! Happy writing! Tk.T~ |
| Draugiks 2004-07-10 ch 1, | abusePitiful, just pitiful. Oh, did you mean for it to be that way? This poem made me feel as if I was watching this person, not feeling her. It just wasn't... evil enough... don't ask... you've got the depression, do you got the self-hate? Well, not as much. Though I congradulate you on the life-like experience, it still didn't make me feel as if I were in her shoes. Just watching her. By the way, I like your style, how you write for yourself and not just for reviews. It isn't selfish. It's art. |