BEAUTIFUL! I have no idea where you come up with these haunting words, but they fit together so perfectly and beautifully that it's stunning. Please...never stop writing! Mwah! I miss you already, girly.

The best poem I've read in months...

Spiffy... damn good actually.
Really good job- I like the rhythm in it, and the subtle rhyming, all that fun stuff. And I like what it's saying, too- refreshing. Graet job.

THIS BLEW ME AWAY! Hel-LO favorites list! Heheh, you've heard my rant in class

wow... it's refreshing to read something with a new theme to it on here.. and especially when it's as powerful as this piece is. Incredible. People really are so self-absorbed and self-pitying now-a-days.. and I'm well aware that I tend to be the exact same way, so I'm including myself in that, but still.. it's a shame.

Oh wow! This is so good. It's incredibly clever and very beautiful. This is amazing. Well done. You're very talented. :D
Please feel free to R&R my work, you review above all would be greatly valued. I really like this poem. Well done and keep it up! :D