Reviews for How to Grow Fruit

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Bloodfeeder94 2008-07-29 ch 13,	abuseYAY! I can't FREAKING WAIT for the next chapter! I'm going to go vote on this right away! and PLZ, PLZ, PLZ update soon!11!!
Bloodfeeder94 2008-07-29 ch 3,	abuseK, I know you've been on an editing stint with the last two chapters, so here's 2 mistakes I found: The line between the chapter and the title (at the very start) and in this paraghraph you forget to put : between the actions. At the very start of your A/N, it says: It happens when you focus all your energies on one story and forget about the new guy. pets the story Not to worry, though. and it's "pets the story" part that needs the :s ok, and great editing on the other chapters, and I abosolutly love what you've done with this story! :K Bloodfeeder PS I'll keep reviewing on the other chapters if I find any mistakes. If you don't want me to point them out though, just send a message and I'll stop.
TheCresentMoonWriter 2008-07-09 ch 13,	abuseEither the next chapter is VERY VERY long or... your not finishing this story. Well, that sucks. I like it alot. Ryan is AWSOME! I love Jared too! And weirdly I also love Tom. I love the NAME Tom too. I hope you continue it! Its too good NOT to!
Bi-curious George 2008-06-25 ch 6,	abuse^^. That was a really short chapter. Like, yeah, short. I just love how Jared is such a *. Envious*. And I love the characterisation. It's great; I'm really starting to see a new side to both Jared and Ryan (I keep forgetting his name dammit). And yeah...I love it. I think, in terms of criticism...that...well, as much as we found out about the characters and as lovely as they are...I don't think the plot moved forwards enormously. It was basically one conversation and then...meh. Or maybe it wasn't...I'm tired. Omg so tired. I suppose this'll be my last review for the day...night, bleh.
Bi-curious George 2008-06-25 ch 5,	abuseOk, so I've only just got around to reading this again, so that explains the gap of time..kind of. I really loved the humour, e.g. "I heard his breath snag in his throat, and realized belatedly that I'd never actually told him I was gay, but I was only allowed one frantic, internal Oh ** before Mom started chattering at me again." xD. There was a hell of a lot more that made me laugh, but if I want to get on with reading the rest then I shouldn't quote you too much. So I won't. But yeah, I liked it ^^, the only problems were small typos... and that's about it.
magalina 2008-06-21 ch 1,	abuseHey, I just re-read this to make you some more fanart ;) I had forgoten how great it was...I hope you finish it someday :(
TenshiGosuperu 2008-06-14 ch 13,	abuseFirstly I'd like to say that I am very sorry for insulting you but I will. You are a bastard. A bastrdly bastard from bastardsville! Do you have any idea how hooked I am on this story and I just started reading it. Imagine how all the poor people who've stuck with it since the beginning feel. You haven't updated in nearly three years! Have you died? If so I'm sorry because I'm probably disrupting your otherwise peaceful death with my whining but I want...no I need to know what happens next. You left off on he most horrible and dramatic cliff-hanger! How could you do such a thing to the people who love this? You think two munths is bad then how much does two years(over)register on your procrastinating scale? I think on a scale of 1-10 this is a fifty. Okay now that all the mean things are done I wanna say I love you for writing this horribly wonderful story and I hope you update soon. I really, really do.
Bi-curious George 2008-06-03 ch 4,	abuse"But I wasn't sure. I mean, you're old. Do old people still play Halo?"- xD. I love your humour! "Disgusting?" he supplied. "Hideous?"- I'M NOT EVEN SURE WHY I FIND THIS FUNNY! It's probably something about parents badmouthing their children that does it for me I think. xD Revelations! OMG! I love Jared's response. SURELY IT CAN'T BE THAT MUCH OF A SHOCK!? "I grabbed Ryan's shirt sleeve the next time I saw him, dragging him down the hallway, and dodged into our room."- Rawl. I thought this was something else at first xD. SAUCAY! Well, at least I'm not the only one who thinks that something...naughty should happen. GET IN THERE JARED. Oh yeahz. "I ripped my hand away and fisted it instead, slamming it against his dresser to emphasize my point. Which hurt like ** hell, by the way,"- I really can't get enough of Jared's...ingenuity. xD. He's adorable in a strange kind of way. RAWL Ryan...oh you sexy beast. He totally knows what he's doing ;). He blates wants Jared. Oh Ryan...swoon. Le sigh The sooner they jump each other, the better...obviously. Yayyayay! 'Twas ace, again. I can't really think of anything more creative to say than that. Erm, criticisms? There was a hell of a lot of dialogue...but I don't even think that's a criticism...uh, oh ** criticism; I loved it.
Bi-curious George 2008-06-03 ch 3,	abuse^^, this chapter was ace! I had some suspicions that Jared's mum was up to something in chapter 1...but what she said in this chapter just confirmed it for me ^^. She's SO trying to hook up Jared and Ryan. OH YEAHZ. Hehehe, she's so gossipy, I love Jared's mum. I do, love the dialogue in this and I think it blends well with the prose. I LIKED RYAN'S CHARACTER EXPOSITION, and yes, I only said that because I thought it might make me sound clever :D. Erm, it occurs to me that my reviews aren't really very constructive, SO, erm, constructive...yeah, I think that this chapter didn't really advance the plot HUGELY. I know there's the whole 'Ryan's gay' thing, but I think you could've expanded it a bit more. BUT THAT'S JUST MY OPINION, it's too late to change things now anyway, even if you could be bothered. ANYWAYS, yeah, ace story; I'll move onto the next chapter now :D.
Bi-curious George 2008-06-02 ch 2,	abuse"Certainly they had better things to do. Like take my luggage upstairs for me."- xD. Jared is hilariously bitchy! OMG! "I happened to look back and saw it: a gameboy just sitting there, begging for me to take it and give it the love it deserved."- I almost died laughing at that! I love this story so much so far! IT'S AMAZING! Yeahh :D. I love Jared's personality, and I think that Ryan might be a prick, but if he speaks more, perhaps I'll change my mind ^^. BUt at least he's hot! I got what I was looking for :D. Oh yeahz. Oh **, I've tgtg now, I'll read and review more in a few days time. I really shouldn't have been reading this now if I'm honest, but I culdn't resist, so yeah. I'll review the rest soon! It's ace so far! ^^.
Bi-curious George 2008-06-02 ch 1,	abuse^^ I like it so far! Jared has a very bitchy personality- LOVE IT. He's so sweet, in a bizarre, self-harming kind of way. I like the fact that there's lots of dialogue; it breaks up the chapter nicely. OO! I can't wait to see what Morgan and the Uncle who's name I can't remember and Ryan are like. He'd better be hot... or else -.- Moving onto next chapter...
Feel The Waltz 2008-05-18 ch 13,	abuseIt makes me sad you never finished this :(
Lany McCutcheon 2008-05-17 ch 13,	abuseIt has been four years since you published this. And two since the last update. :( This is the first story I read that got me attached to your amazing stories. You need update this...and finish it. I need closure. Desperately. Got it?! Good. :)
Ty Taco 2008-05-16 ch 13,	abuseI love your story. One thing that SLIGHTLY bothers me though is Jared needs to realize that he likes Ryan. He needs to get over himself. What Ryan said was true. He needs to quit the act. Cuz eventually it will get old. xoxoxo, Ty
forbiddenstars 2008-05-06 ch 13, anon.	abuseGUH! oh please please please please update? please? i love the way ryan and jared are going slowly together...just keep them together, please? update and i'll love you forever...

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