Great job! Can I go to paradise too? Very descriptive and beautiful!

Ah, I want to be in paradise... Palm trees swaying in the seabreeze... Sand warm from the sun caressing bar feet... Coconuts giving you a concussion... Ah, what a life. =D

very nice and well writen

Warming, a poem that makes you reach for sunglasses and the cream. You should read my poem "My Escape" It is about a beach too, so is "Cocktails and a light show" They both have the same feel as this so if you enjoyed writing it maybe check them out.
Keep writing and good luck
Nine Iron