This is so... romantic... It's good! No, not just good, it's great! I like the way you alternated your "Love me" and "seduce me" thing. You are really a poet. ^_^ And don't think I'm flattering you 'cause I'm not You're really good. Keep it up and keep writing! i want more from you!

PS: What happened to your "month" poems? I like Cranberry June and your other poems. By the way, did you get my e-mail of "Red Suits You" drawing? I really meant it to be a lot better than that bloody angel. It's just that I can't draw faces yet... really sorry.

what can i say? it is one of the best love poems written from this particular view point that i have ever read. it really does say everything that a person feels and i'm suprised that you were able to write this without pining. are you really not pining? i think you're pining. it really doesnt seem possible to have such a perfect view if a person isnt pining. PINER!

We liked it. We know where you're coming from. Nice job. Please reveiw us back, thqanks.
PS y do fools fall in love?

that was beautiful. aw...

I like this. Smooth flowing and I loved the elegance in the simplicity.