Loved your story! (it was so short! haha)The love quote thing was very original and it helped the story to come together well.

Aw. I just had to review for this chappie. I feel bad for Mira, haha. I like your story a lot!! Now..I'm going to finish the chapters I haven't read yet, but I just had to review for this chappie.

Wow, I just read the first chapter, and I can already tell this is going to be a good story! Ok, have to go now, I'm eager to read the rest. ^_^

i really liked it... and i love the quotes, i felt they suited the story very well, thanx for sharing them all... i liked, "“ Evil is but a shadow...It is nothing but the darkness which can become light through love.” have no idea why, though... i felt the whole mira thing could have been wrapped up a bit more... but yes, it was great, and...i dont think i said this in my chap 5 review, the end for that was really beautiful.

aw *sniffs happily* they KISSED! but poor mira, that sounds like an...er...awkward date, to say the least. and she got her first kiss! Yay! only crit: the party coulda been a bit longer. but the park ting was very sweet

lol, one second mira's pining 4 him, the next, she's hooking them up lol. cute chappie!

another good chappie ;-) aww he was really nice... the cops woulda messed THAT up. one thing, trev says "I’ve never seen a girl hate me so much.” i dunno it seems a little overy dramatic. but thats all.

karl is such a sweetheart...ack. arrogant trevor. can't believe he dumped tht poor girl and then BOTHERS her lol. one thing, u said, "I felt arms wrap around me and I shuddered with cold" maybe it would make more sense if u switched that around... the bus thing was cute, sux 4 him lol. i like matt, he should provide for some entertaining moments...:-)

on to the next chappie!

Okay, question here... why the ** is there only ONE review on the brilliant story. *shakes head* I really don't understand how that’s possible. I mean, I know its only 5 chapters and its known that the more chapters you put up the you'll have more reviews, so you should have AT LEAST 30. May even that’s stingy. Grr... It’s not fair. I've read some stories that aren't even half as good as this and they have at least ten. This story was so good. I loved it. You're an awesome writer; please keep putting stuff up here.

well i tip my hat to u it was a great chapie i'm sorry i havent reviewed but with it being SUMMER! i've been bussy! anyways great job!! keep it up!