wow. amazing. Subtle, nice touch - lovely beginning, too, what with it being so mundane. I really loved this one. :)

Obscenely good without trying it seems.

Great. Liked how the characters were "I", "you", and "he", sort of putting the reader into the writing. I also liked that the narrator dismissed the truck at first. Seriously, I probably would have done the same. I was a bit confused about the ending, but then I scrolled up again and realized that it was supposed to end without punctuation and...what can I say? Awesome idea.