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| ludicrous louie 2005-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abusewas that a person...or the clarity of truth? It could be either in my mind...i see it as a little bit of everything leaving...thats great writing... |
| Li'ain 2004-09-14 ch 1,  | abuseI really liked this poem even more than the last one i reviewed which was written later. I think this would make a great song never mind poem. You really have the hang of imagery I can like see what your talking about. It's just great. |
| RaHo 2004-08-09 ch 1, | abuselovely. =D |
| amazingblazes 2004-05-18 ch 1, | abuseWoah. That was really well written! I like the way the last two lines went together, the whole "endless cycle" thing, and then bringing in the first line of the poem. That was great! |