was that a person...or the clarity of truth? It could be either in my mind...i see it as a little bit of everything leaving...thats great writing...

I really liked this poem even more than the last one i reviewed which was written later. I think this would make a great song never mind poem. You really have the hang of imagery I can like see what your talking about. It's just great.

lovely. =D

Woah. That was really well written! I like the way the last two lines went together, the whole "endless cycle" thing, and then bringing in the first line of the poem. That was great!