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Reviews For: All Alone
ludicrous louie 2005-04-02 . chapter 1
was that a person...or the clarity of truth? It could be either in my mind...i see it as a little bit of everything leaving...thats great writing...
Li'ain 2004-09-14 . chapter 1
I really liked this poem even more than the last one i reviewed which was written later. I think this would make a great song never mind poem. You really have the hang of imagery I can like see what your talking about. It's just great.
RaHo 2004-08-09 . chapter 1
lovely. =D
amazingblazes 2004-05-18 . chapter 1
Woah. That was really well written! I like the way the last two lines went together, the whole "endless cycle" thing, and then bringing in the first line of the poem. That was great!
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