This one is very action-packed and sad. I loved how they discovered civilization only to have it ripped away. A great installment to your series, good work Case-man! =D

Hm...hm...this very well done for your Inevitability series, probably your best yet. Keep writing, because I know you can pull off something more darker, and something new to surprise us.

Keep writing stories like this and people will notice your talents. You got some real talent in the genre and this is your strongest part of the Inevitability series. Gothic.net is sad when it comes to horror because all they want are the trends, and this story goes against the trends. It will stand the test of time.