aww! i luv the last part! fab story

Cool... What happened to Miki's sister?

LOVELY STUFF!! UPDATE!

man who IS that guy? he IS annoying...i'm hoping that will get better? i really have to go now gotta go eat my BEAGAL BITES! heheh hahah mwahahahahahaha! ya! i bhwahahahaha-ed! or mwaha whatever...now i'm really acting random...i better stop... i'll review more tomorrow! bye!

oh my gosh Raye was watching them!! ya, i read this chapter too today...i think i'll go read the next one...this is good i like it!

hey! i just read the 2nd chapter (sorry i'm reading it chapter by chapter, but scince its real long i'll probably read like a chapter or two a day. sorry. :-D)
anyway i really like this chapter and how you pointed out Raye really is a nice girl. i'll read more soon!
-Kashe

well...no i didn't see it comeing...is that a bad thing? hey what did lucas ask miki in the cofee shop? you never said. maybe i should read the other chapters...but i'll have to later. i'm really getting cought up in this story! (i mwna all the ones with nathen, raye, miki, erick and everyone...ya) they are really good! I'll read the rest of thie one later!
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Kashe

Hi, I'm a new person reading and I am just amazed the way this story has turned out! It seems like Raye is a little mental, that Miki is... well, Miki, and LUCAS IS HOT I CAN JUST IMAGINE HIM! *cough* sorry had a little outbust there. But in all seriousness, if you dont write another chapter soon, i will bite off your head.
*Ever~White*

Poor Raye:( She's evil, but Miki is kinda acting mean. Lucas is her boyfriend! And Kara was really harsh too... Great job.
~The Light

I love your story:) I just read your other ones and I love them too! I'll try and review more from now on. Great job. I have a feeling the secret admirer is that boy from the library...:)
~The Light

Ha, some definate conflict setting up here. I have to (grudgingly) admit that I didn't see it coming... Though I really should have. Good job with the characterization, and capturing that "freshman" feel- I've been there.
And hey, now, don't knock the chess club :P On a more serious note, I'm interested now and I'll continue reading through the rest of this story (even though this isn't typical genre for me- I'm usually more of a fantasy/sci-fi buff even though I write "real-life" stuff).
Congratulations on sticking with this through 20K words, I don't seem to have the ability to do that (yet) so I look up to you.

Great story. There are times when I want to hate Raye but then you kind of see where she's coming from at times too. Keep up the great work and keep updating!!

please update soon. i want to know how much worse. btw, i really like that you show both sisters points of view, so that neither is really the "bad guy" even if we dont like one of them.

UPDATE YOU MAD WOMAN! don't leave me on the clif, that's just not nice T.T

dont mistake the lack of reviews for lack of readers. its a good story anyway just keep it up