   Beatrixx Ripley 2008-05-13 . chapter 14Aw. I wanted to see Lilian and Rose some more. |
 ZiggyGurl 2005-02-11 . chapter 14Aw! That was such a cute chapter. I'm glad everything went well. Can't wait to read some of your new stuff... |
 hpfreakout 2005-02-10 . chapter 14Great chapter, awsome story. Its so interesting, I loved the ending. i'm glad that roxanne is going to try and be a better mom. thats always good. I also love the babys name, its such a nice name (I have some odd obsession with names and stuff) Great chapter, awsome story. |
| hpfreakout 2005-02-09 . chapter 13 very good story,its so interesting. Exspecially once you see how bad roxanne's life turned out. Its rather sad that all that happened to her and Hazel ended up so happy. I like Pricilla a lot, shes a really great character. She's also so nice and helpful,even if she was a bit(well very) mean in the beginning. Great story, can't wait to read more. Write more soon. |
| ZiggyGurl 2005-02-09 . chapter 13 Aw! I don't want it to end! This chapter was great, and cute. ^_^ You are an awesome writer. |
 Terriah 2004-10-09 . chapter 10wo wonderful fic.i loved go u |
 Treg 2004-09-29 . chapter 10u didnt rush! til the end! then u rushed! no, dont end it! it was goign good! now, its all.. weird... |
| ZiggyGurl 2004-09-26 . chapter 10 AW! I'm sad that there is only one more chapter left! Ah well. This was great, I really liked it. |
| Terriah 2004-09-12 . chapter 9 evil ryan nt a nice boy |
| Treg 2004-09-10 . chapter 9 noos! dont let her get caught!! shes almost there! |
 Shadow Haven 2004-09-09 . chapter 8o...push his desk to wards d rack and climb on top of it ; ) u'll reach the keys!! GO HAZEL GO! Stupid paul...he dusnt noe dat we young ones aren't THAT stupid!! XD o...paul becums hazel daddy? lol...if he was...he'd b a rely strict one...seeing hes in the police department and everything...i wonder where he keeps all his anger and emotions and stay patient?? =^o.o^=
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 ZiggyGurl 2004-09-05 . chapter 8 YAY! Good chapter. This is the second story I'm reading that has a character named Paul. Must be a pouplar name. |
| courtney 2004-09-04 . chapter 1 what up doh that was off the heezy u know u know girl im gong to the next story |
| Terriah 2004-08-28 . chapter 7 WOW!i really cnt wait for more! |
| ZiggyGurl 2004-08-26 . chapter 7 I'm too lazy to sign in and too hyper to not review. Wonderous chapter (I love that word, isn't it wonderous...lol) Lillian and Rose, isn't that ironic? I love flower names. Now I'm just rambling...but anyway, like I said, great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next! |
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