hey i just wanted to say this story is great but you never told us what her father wanted to tell her.But other than that i absolutely(?) loved the story.

AMAZING STORY.

I like this. Its good. I might even place it on my favorites...

My name is Zero, and I personally enjoyed this story. Great job, it's hard to find things like that here on fp. great job even though you need to update, PIAV.

Omg, that was my kinda story... The soppy love story with a twist and a happy ending. Good on ya girl! Keep writing!

I just read the whole thing, and I loved it very much! Keep writing the way you do because it makes my day to read a good story.

Ive just started this but you can already tell that it's Alan who's "Sky." And Sky is a girls name

heh, i just finished reading the last two chapters and they were wonderful!! sry for the late review. this story overall was amazing. i really enjoyed reading it! ur a awesome writer! keep it up!!

-kiran

I loved your story. The plot was really good. :) I'm definitely looking into the rest of your stories.

~WT

OMGOSH! That was the greatest ending to a story I've read in awhile and this deffinatly is the best story on fictionpress right now! I loved it so much and yes you should get it published! Well I'm so going to read that other story you started when you post it! Amazing job!

*sniff* its over...*sigh* i'll just have to satisfy my need for reading with your otehr stories...lol...loved it! absolutely love dit! continue writing!

~*~me~*~

Awesome! You shoudl be proud of your self. You've finished the story!!:D The preview of the other story is cool. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

I am very, very proud of you, my dear friend. LS was excellent. And wow, I'm loving PIAV already! Haha, the mother sounds like a certain principal I know and Chelsea sounds like a munchkin I know and so far Claire is reminding me of Morgan. :) I can't wait to find out more about all this and I love the way you began in media res. It makes the story so much more exciting! O, please update PIAV soon! I wanna find out what happens! Lots of Pride and Love Is Being Sent Your Way! ~*Mettie*~

Very nice. I couldn't have stood to see them torn apart. Ugh, I SO want the surfer pillow from the PBTeen catalogue, the pink, blazer, the awesome Dell, and a boyfriend! Man, they get it all. Haha, it's funny to see that you're even concerned about matching things in fiction. You have no idea how typical that is and how much of your personality has been expressed in small ways in this story. Lizzie's so much like you - it's great. I kind of hope to think that I'm like Courtney, but she's way too cool for me to be exactly like her. Hey, a girl can dream, right? Well, I'll miss reading this story FOR SURE, but I can't wait to read the next one! Love Always, ~*Mettie*~

*tear* it's over... how sad. but you did an amazing job with the story. you should be proud. can't wait til your new story comes out!