a little short, but still great. I love your writing!

The folly of self deception. Nevertheless a good poem about it.

Me likeys! I think it'd be better though if you format the whole poem like you did in the beginning... well, this is how it would actually look.
"Shut them tight
Just pretend
That this is truth and there's no end"
You don't HAVE to do it like that. If you leave it the way it is, I'll still like the poem just as much. So, yeah...
~SRA

Heehee, it jumps out at u doesn't it? great poem^^

what a pen name, really good. I like this, really builds on the title. keep writing
Nine Iron