I really did enjoy reading this. I don't think you are a bad writer, so there.

It was really quiet here while I was reading this, and that made it even more... um... immaculate? I don't know what it is about this poem, but my every thought was white... Weird, huh?

I imagin this as being a life after death sort of thing, but i could be wrong, there are lots of ways that it can be interprated. It's a good peom, though it could have been a little longer. Luv always, WDH

I kind of feel with the current news and ongoing bloodshed and turmoil of war, this might reflect that overall anxiety... "While angry lines, from broken minds do tear this world apart." I would interpret in this way, maybe that feeling you have that you don't know what its about is a pervading anxiety that is reflective of where our everyday life has fallen. Good piece, some very good lines in here.

Summarys are easy, worst comes to worst say the first line or two. they usually are the lines you write too hook a reader. I like the layout, simple and easy to read aswell as being pleasing to look at and neat.