| Reviews for An Excuse to Live |
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karmakaze 5/21/04 . chapter 1Wow...you're 13? This is really beautiful. I love rain so much! |
Blissfully Unaware 5/21/04 . chapter 1Isn't the best? ISN'T THE BEST? This is the best of yours that you've written. Okay, so I've only read two, but this is really beautiful and powerfully written. I too love the rain, and I like the analogies you used. To sum it all up, I love this. |
destinee ariarti 5/21/04 . chapter 1I like the fact that you said 'an excuse to live' instead of 'a reason to live'. i dont know, i just like that. kacie |
Elizabeth Gibbs 5/18/04 . chapter 1I like this poem. It's really nice and I can totally imagine you in the rain. Good Job! |
somethingpoeticandmeaningful 5/18/04 . chapter 1Fellow Rain Angel: Amen. |
AllThatMatters 5/18/04 . chapter 1Wow, we just get this image of someone and the rain just pouring all over everything and its just so clear and beautiful. We feel what you're feeling in this poem. Our favorite line was 'I don't mind the blood that a thorn has freed' because we never thought of bleeding that way before.. Anyway, please reveiw us back. Thanks. PS Y do fools fall in love? |
AlahanTao 5/18/04 . chapter 1I thought it was pretty good. I enjoy seeing a different take on love-angst. Too many people write the same old boring love-angst poems, but this one is different. By the way, the A/N at the end kinda ruins the mood. |
Tanize 5/18/04 . chapter 1loved it. it creates a vivid image of her(his...? i'm presuming it's a girl, for some reason. xp) feelings and surroundings. :3 gotta read another one of your poems. ;) keep up the good work. (: |