|Reviews for An Excuse to Live|
| karmakaze 5/21/04 . chapter 1
Wow...you're 13? This is really beautiful. I love rain so much!
| Blissfully Unaware 5/21/04 . chapter 1
Isn't the best? ISN'T THE BEST? This is the best of yours that you've written. Okay, so I've only read two, but this is really beautiful and powerfully written. I too love the rain, and I like the analogies you used. To sum it all up, I love this.
| destinee ariarti 5/21/04 . chapter 1
I like the fact that you said 'an excuse to live' instead of 'a reason to live'. i dont know, i just like that.
| Elizabeth Gibbs 5/18/04 . chapter 1
I like this poem. It's really nice and I can totally imagine you in the rain. Good Job!
| somethingpoeticandmeaningful 5/18/04 . chapter 1
Fellow Rain Angel: Amen.
| AllThatMatters 5/18/04 . chapter 1
Wow, we just get this image of someone and the rain just pouring all over everything and its just so clear and beautiful. We feel what you're feeling in this poem. Our favorite line was 'I don't mind the blood that a thorn has freed' because we never thought of bleeding that way before.. Anyway, please reveiw us back. Thanks.
PS Y do fools fall in love?
| AlahanTao 5/18/04 . chapter 1
I thought it was pretty good. I enjoy seeing a different take on love-angst. Too many people write the same old boring love-angst poems, but this one is different. By the way, the A/N at the end kinda ruins the mood.
| Tanize 5/18/04 . chapter 1
it creates a vivid image of her(his...? i'm presuming it's a girl, for some reason. xp) feelings and surroundings. :3
gotta read another one of your poems. ;)
keep up the good work. (: