Reviews for Brokenhearted - FictionPress.com

Eagle Seance 2004-05-18 ch 1,	I like the way you've written your lines- they seem to imply feelings getting intense and then coming to a conclusion kind of thing. Angst poetry at its best. Nice work.
PCSG89 2004-05-18 ch 1,	I like it! The scenes are well written, and the description is used perfectly. Good job! If you ever have time please R&R some of my work! I'd love to hear your opinions! Your poem is excellent, and if these are the emotions in your head I only hope the fact that your a great writer will bring you a little comfort.