That was bloody amazing. The emotion was powerful and the rhythm effortlessly drew me from each wonderful stanza to the next. Keep up the wonderful work!!
~The One and Only

Nicely constructed and rendered, very impactive ending.
Well Done
Keep Writing!
F.C
Check out some of my works if you like, I think Fairytale or even Killer may appeal, see what you think. ^V^

wow very revealing. good poem over all. better than i could ever do lets put it that way

I like it. its true you should be able to die for the one you love, but dont take it too seriously because if you did die for the person cahnces are their was so much more you were supposed to do... well ill see you later Takkun

very nice; very nice.
it makes you think about dying for people. i especially like the last two lines.
well done