hey siobhan! this a great poem you came up with and as with the other poems i've read of yours, this one touches me to and realtes to me.
Jessica
my new saying- does love matter?

I think your poem was really well written. I can see your emotions flowing through it. To tell you the truth it semi-reminds me of a few i've read before and a little like mine. Good job. I also know what its like to have someone turn their back on me. I know what it's like to cry lonesome tears. I know what its like to have no one be there or pretending only to hurt me more. well done.
call me Moori

I like it, its the prefect size and the flow is smooth. I like the emotions behind it.
*Elcy*

This was an interesting poem, I really liked the ending. I also like the reference to "lonesome tears" good job! _