Wow, that was a little gory and is so not rated K. Otherwise it was good. Keep writing.

Awesome and you got me hooked! Good intro!

you can certainly go from a humorous topic to a serious and deadly topic. well done, i luv it. plz update soon!

I love the title! after reading it i had to read the story and im impressed! i like the plot so far and i cant wait for you to write more!

As ever - update!

very nice

This is intriguing. You must have an amazing imagination. I've always wanted to write a story like this, and reading this has given me the courage to possibly try.