Your story is like alcohol: It is addictive and kills brain cells. It doesn't come with a hangover, however, and for that I am glad.

-SapphireIris

You officially fail at life.

Very good story! I liked your message.

That was great!

you only used concept 2 more times. oh to the infinite disapointment.
moving along, intriguing chapter as per usual.
i think i generally kept up with it. im very distracted at the moment so ill get straight to the point. well done and kudos.

lol! what the hell? forget the old mans drugs, get me some of yours!
preferably now. or later whichever suits you.
moving along, this was interesting, a tad confusing maybe, but i did see a point amongst the vague sentances which made up your essay.
to know what success is, you need to fail.
if you have high expectations, chances are you will be disapointed.
i wasnt disapointed for i didnt have high expectations in the first place *the ficpress essay section tends to do that to ya* so yes, i liked this.
good work, kudos!

LOL! I loved it, it's an interesting and histerical philosophy! Great job! _

i need a different word for interesting... hang on a sec, i'll go thesauraus it... piquant! ok that's what this piece was. the philosophy is great and the way you introduced the old man made me laugh. ingenious

That's an interesting philosophy.
So when did you fail?

Thats hilarious, thanks for that, just what i needed in the middle of a boring history lesson.:)

Ha ha ha Very funny, ew old dying man. But still I liked it a lot, not the most fasinating thing i have read, lol, but then what is?
xCatx