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The Light and The Glass 2007-03-20 . chapter 1
i feel almost like i'm walking down a hallway in a mental institution... sterile and boring. very surreal feeling.

"air that never moves and a ceiling

that’s just a little too low."

i love tose lines, awesome job.
Sang Yu Nung 2004-05-19 . chapter 1
Wow, another great poem! ^__^ I like the idea of the white rectangles, definitely interesting.
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