This one's really good too. I've noticed that some of your poems have a really strong visual concept, like when you talk about shining light and stuff like that. The first part of this sounded really happy, like you had some good times, but the last part was a little sad. It's a moody poem, which is nice because it makes it feel alive. I know my metaphors and analogies are all really strange, but I guess that's just how I look at the world. Through a strange lens, lol.

that was beautiful, the way it was so happy, but ending...well..not so happy. loves a tricky thing, isnt it?

~SG~

that was damn beautiful!

'voice of love in an unloving world.' love that line. Very haunting poem.