 Aslan Israel 2005-03-11 . chapter 1Powerful message. Very nice. |
 singingspeechless 2004-07-12 . chapter 1again...i could hear the music in my head! it was awesome! you have a way with words... |
 The Great Charlatan 2004-06-14 . chapter 1Did you say that Satan was beutiful...
May you see grey for the first time in your life,
Good health,
The Great Charlatan |
 do not resuscitate 2004-05-25 . chapter 1that was great. i could almost hear the song in my head. my favorite line was "Sin's your life, you've infected the majority" awesome song. |
 my-vision 2004-05-20 . chapter 1awesome! i luv how its so upbeat. you are REALLY GOOD. hehe. the only thing i would suggest is maybe not repeating "Archenemy" so much when it's not in your chorus. at the end is good though - it reflects the song's meaning and tempo. good job! God bless! |