This is Hilarious! Oh, wow! 'Toothpaste'? She's 6! On what fing chances in hell would 16 (turning 17) year old girls say as an answer to their SIX year old sister? Ahahaha. LOL.

Dear M M,

LOL! That story was hilarious. Nice dialogue and depth of characters considering it's size. 'Cleavage is toothpaste'! LOL! Hmm, is a romance genre really appropriate? I think there was a 'Family' category somewhere. I hate having to categorise my work sometimes; it's so difficult to decide where to put it. Poor Sally and Jessica XD I remember my little sister asking me a same question but it was actually 'what's a willy?' and I didn't answer and called for mum! Or tried. I don't think anyone ended up answering her. Excellent piece of humor that all can relate to.

Regards,Sweets

AHAHAHA! That was hilarious! And the ending was just. . .a complete. . .SHOCK! I can't believe that girl was six years old. Six! And cleavage being toothpaste, hahaha. The third story of yours that is replacing all the other ones that used to be on my Faves List, but were sadly deleted. :'( Anwyway, keep up the excellent work!

This is funny. Is it a one-shot? If it is, you should write it in the summary.

I like funny.

*falls on ground* OMG!
Six? SIX! Quite...interesting *wink*

Oh no! I think many ppl know what this experience is like!

Very nice and realistic! Kids always have a habbit of going straight for the Jugular! Keep up the good work.