Very good poem, and it's emotionally powerful as well. Proves my point that the majority of men in the world are trash and need to be dealt with. It's a very sad poem, yet really good.

This is so pretty in a depressing way. You have a lot of talent. I hope the guy in this one gets kicked.

This is very powerfully written, very nice poem Lozfairy x

thats how my friend did it; and her boyfriend broke up with her that day or the day before
everyone said it was because of him but i dunno but i guess i can relate
good poem

very interesting. Well written, play of words were nice. Kudo's

Wow! This is INCREDIBLY powerful!
Well done, I pride on on coming over so well on such a difficult subject. Well done!
ps. please feel free to check out my work, caos your views on it would be valued greatly!

Damn, this is so powerful, much loves to this, the entire story plot line and everything, so beautiful