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Reviews For: Still Waters Run Deep

AethraZip
2004-05-21
ch 2,
I still say it can't be his dad, b/c of the long hair.. unless his dad is.. is.. a HIPPIE!! O0;
*terror*
~Zippy
AethraZip
2004-05-21
ch 1,
OMG. I love the title.
Since I've already read it, no other comments, except, uh.. meep? Yeah, meep.. o0;;
~Zippy
weepingsilver
2004-05-20
ch 2,
thaks for the review and see, now I'm reveiwing yours! anyhoo update soon or I will be forced to. . . um annoy you. And you know I can, eapically since I'm dieing to know what happens.
Still Lotus Tears and still...
2004-05-20
ch 2,
Nice to see how the character progresses, he turned out pretty decent if not a little baggage in his trunk.
Good character growth and very good to see he didn't end up like his father. Keep em coming =] and make the chapters a lol longer you just get going and then it's over =[
Keep up the good work
Lotuss Tears and too lazy t...
2004-05-20
ch 1,
Good so far, i knew some kids who got beat pretty bad in high school, a sad fact of life i suppose, but you capture it well.
Keep up the good work
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