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| AethraZip 2004-05-21 ch 2, | I still say it can't be his dad, b/c of the long hair.. unless his dad is.. is.. a HIPPIE!! O0; *terror* ~Zippy |
| AethraZip 2004-05-21 ch 1, | OMG. I love the title. Since I've already read it, no other comments, except, uh.. meep? Yeah, meep.. o0;; ~Zippy |
| weepingsilver 2004-05-20 ch 2, | thaks for the review and see, now I'm reveiwing yours! anyhoo update soon or I will be forced to. . . um annoy you. And you know I can, eapically since I'm dieing to know what happens. |
| Still Lotus Tears and still... 2004-05-20 ch 2, | Nice to see how the character progresses, he turned out pretty decent if not a little baggage in his trunk. Good character growth and very good to see he didn't end up like his father. Keep em coming =] and make the chapters a lol longer you just get going and then it's over =[ Keep up the good work |
| Lotuss Tears and too lazy t... 2004-05-20 ch 1, | Good so far, i knew some kids who got beat pretty bad in high school, a sad fact of life i suppose, but you capture it well. Keep up the good work |