A tad...disconcerting, but very prettily described. ^_^. i really enjoyed reading it.

I love it update soon

I liked all of your stories that I have read so far, but this one I just can't get myself to like. Don't get me wrong, it's not a bad story, I just thought that it was a little too weird for me. My reaction to the last chapter was, "WTF?" And that's how I feel about this whole story. Oh well.

Hey I just wanted to let you know how great of a writer you are, each story I've read so far is very interesting and I' havent seen that in a long time...and it inspires me to be a great writer like you. You put so much thought and detail into your characters and their settings that its almost as if I can see them...anyways I'm rambling as I tend to do...but i'd really like it if you could read some of my stories and give me ideas since i seem to be kinda stuck..he,he...k bie.

good story, though it dosn't really follow the myth (ex Ganymede was a prince of Troy) but this is an awsom little fic so far, keep updating!

good story. liked it.

u have to write more!

a hundred years away from his innocence?
hmm.
interesting
GABRIEL IS KISSING OTHER PEOPLE
omg
the ending
is
freaky
you kind of promised more sex
*sigh*
hermes

oh, you are so dead.
you call this a chapter?
it's a f*ing blurb!
he gives money to Gabriel?
Gabriel nuzzles the bag?
Gabriel has changed?
*sobs*

Why should Gabriel wake up?
oh god, the car again
>.<
i think the car is haunting me.
handcuffs?
HANDCUFFS?
artificial?
Olympus is artificial?
*blink*
OLYMPUS CAN BE REACHED BY A CAR?
dancing
*.*
woah *glare*
what the hell did you do to Hermes?
ugh, Gabriel is such a baby
*sobs* Hermes, come back you little boy, be good
NO RAPE NO RAPE NO RAPE NO RAPE
oh
okay
*sigh with relief*
wait
no relief
"Good little **?"
*sniff*
i'm sorry, Hermes
WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY

And finally, the encouraging reviews that stir your creative juices.
-_-
short chapter
it's longer than chapter one
BUT IT'S STILL A BLOODY SHORT CHAPTER
-_-
ravishing
there is ravishing
didn't Zarid promise no ravishing
okay, just to get this straight, in paragraph three, Zarid is kissing Gabriel and touching him down there?
and here Gabriel loses some of his innocence *cries* poor Gabriel, you're never gonna get it back
huh?
Why are Gabriel's eyes widening with shock and lust at his lover's body.
INNOCENT. (and Zarid's gotta be huge, Gabriel should be frightened)
oh, here we have 'massive chest'
woah
O.o
Zarid has diamonds on his chest
*mouth drops*
so cool
And don't forget, Gabriel, though Zues can give you Olympus, HE'S GONNA CHEAT ON YOU AND THEN YOU AND HERA CAN TEAM UP AND TORTURE ZUES'S ILLEGITIMATE CHILDREN AND OTHER LOVERS.

This is preety good so far. But Em you see, I'm Hebrew and I live in Israel and I have to tell you I've never heard the name Zarid before. It sounds more Arab then Hebrew and I'm sure that the Hebrew word for 'Ambush' is not Zarid- It's Maarav.
I don't know where you got that from, maybe it's a word from the bible (we don't actually speak like that, I can hardly read it. In bible class the teacher is the only one willing to read).
Anyway, as I said, so far so good and I'm going to read on...

*confused* did you mistake chapter three for two?
okay, Zarid wants to take him from this life? to give him a better one, just because he saw him cross the street and saw innocence!?
wait, last paragraph.
did they actually have sex or not?
is Zarid Zues?
Olympus? a place built by Zarid? intersting. if this isn't the actualy myth, then it definitely holds MAJOR allusions.
and, um
i do like Gabriel
Zarid's creepy

rape
*covers eyes*
why why why
does Zues take Ganymedes against his own will? and this isn't really a sex chapter
IT'S A FOREPLAY CHAPTER
can't Gabriel be more pliant
more wooing
of course
it is your masterpiece
you are the one with the vision
*eyes still covered*
while i have known
AT LEAST NOT IN THE AREA OF VIRGIN SEX
and come on
you have poor Gabriel crying and resisting
while the man (WHO THE ** IS HE) laughs
okay
S & M, anyone?
*glares*
*shrugs*
*throws up hands*
*cries*

Okay. I BEGGED FOR THIS AND IT'S ONLY FOUR PARAGRAPHS LONG. FOUR PARAGRAPHS. GET THAT IN YOUR HEAD. FOUR PARAGRAPHS.
Gabriel ~ WHAT CAN I GET FROM FOUR PARAGRAPHS.
Man in car ~ WHAT CAN I GET FROM FOUR PARAGRAPHS.
Car ~ black, pretty, seductive. probably expensive and has an engine that purrs. maybe used to pick up boys to rape or Gabriel might be a rich brat. doubt it. you said 'goodness'
i associate bitchiness with 'richness'
and, was he expecting the car
OH
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