i cant think of anything to say for this one, but i just really like it.

Amazing.

It's awesome... really powerful and moving. I can totally see why your class were silent for five mins

This is so amazing. I'm putting it in my favourites.

wow, this one's pretty cool too. Im hopeless at I AM poetry *dramatic sigh* oh woe is me!

That was a very beautiful poem that flows nicely. Nice work!

This is so beautiful, so passionate and heartfelt, it reminds me of a speech I wrote for my class once...very nice.

hey, thanks for the review, really appreciated.
I can see why your class was silent. It's a very emotional and heart-felt poem. It's very good, your style is great! Rock on!

Awesome...people can related...I loved it alot...Sounds like me...seeing past this bizzare and alien world...

I can see why, when you read this in front of your class, they were silent for 5 min.! That was very deep and moving! The imagery was AWESOME too! I hope your feelings have improved since then, because I care about ya a lot! That was really good, keep writing!

::is silent for a full five minutes:: YOU WISH! LOL! Good Poem!

Hey, that was a really good free lance, i think...