Nice poem. Thanks for the review on my story... you don't mind if I use one of those ideas do you? I think the guy afraid to go outside was particularly creative. Anyway, nice poem once again.

Even better than Good Charlotte's "The Little Things" Great job!

It is always the little things that bring us down. That is true. A good meaning inside a good song equals a great job. Keep up the work.

my davie-poo!! i miss u so much!! i liked this song n i hope ur doing well! I love you!
-Skye

I like it,such a good beat and thnx for reviewing ma new chapter in deep dungeon! Y did u not do another chapter for making the band i was so dissappointed!