*applaus* I love it, So amazing...It's just so great...you've recognized people who so rarely get recognized and somehow everyone fits into these catagories...no one was left out...I don't know how to respond, but to say you're a great writer and I don't know how you get inspired but it's working and I love reading your stuff!

This is amazing, brillant even! It reminds me of a song from the band Kill Hannah. You did an amazing job.
keep writing-
til-iburnout

Such a range of emotions for a simple yet strong action. This poem is just amazing at bringing that about without detailing the emotions themselves yet bringing them out. Very well done..

Wow! You are really good at rhyming stuff!

That was an amazing poem. Keep it up. I liked how your maintained the rhythm throughout the entire poem, a lot of times that’s hard to do. Great message.
-Lea

Aw, that's awesome. I love how the end makes it sound like you mean everyone, as if everyone fits in to those categories. Great job )!
chochang913

Magnificent. The rhyme scheme is amazing, the flow is gorgeous, the idea is wonderful. The whole thing is very well written.
Great job

damn good.2 thumbs up

wow this is great I love it!
xCatx

I think this is an excellent poem. it's touching in so many ways and it makes me think of everything that's wrong with this world. Excellent work