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| Maggie 2004-10-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseHEY! hahah that was good! hey does this mean that Amara wont fall deeply *faints dramitcally with hand over forehead* in love with Fex? i thought she would...so now shes going to fall for the Garret guy rite?? hahah lol that was good...ill read ur other story now..GO READ MINE! under name of Mr. Imagination, go to my bio and click on it! *winks* i noe u want to! hahah hope ur having a good holiday! ~maggie |
| XxDragon Princess NikkixX 2004-08-08 ch 2, anon. | abuse*humph* Well, i figure if you aren't going to update Lost. . i will read something that you do update *muahahahaha* Anyway, very good so far. Poor Amara. *sniffles* I like this much. It sorta feels like you could go in more depth with your characters tho. I feel like I don't know them as well as I should yet. Just a heads up! You're doing awesome *applauds* ~Nikki~ |
| XxDragon Princess NikkixX 2004-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh. . .a very interesting beginning! I hope for an update soon! Nikki P.s. Thanks for reviewing Castle Cintyras! *hugz* |
| izzy-bh 2004-05-23 ch 1,  | abusehey mel! you never gave me credit for beta-ing your story YOU BALL OF WOOL! im glad you have 4 reviews (and after these 5). lol im sitting on your lap and your explaining false fascades. brb i'll review later |
| ammm~r0z haha i rote r0z ah... 2004-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abusehey mel aka. family frend! ;) *cracks up* :P i dunno y im reviewin coz like i co0d jusS call u ... but i kno how much u like reviews *maSsive hint 2 dose ppl hu r readin dis n want mel 2 continue but cbb 2 revieww ;)* n so i decided 2 increase ur reviews to 4! :D rnt ya proud of me? :P dis is heaps go0d lol.. huge improvement from ur yr 6 sentences.. im neva gona letcha forget dat :) keep doin dis story..odawise ill b afta ya.. i wanna kno wot happenz 2 em lol luv foreva + a day am xoxo p.s. monks on so0n! p.p.s. i jusS realise i use msn language n emoticons 2 much *Sigh* :P |
| shyXshortieXbabe 2004-05-21 ch 1, | abusehey now, it's so not bad. Lol. I thought it was interesting and i'd like to read more. it's very cute, and i'd love to see how the plot develops. Keep it up! |
| alexei04 2004-05-21 ch 1, | abuseI think that this has great potential! please continue! |
| Fukai-Ao 2004-05-21 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was kind of interesting, not boring or stupid. You should continue. The old man - he's evil, isn't he? ~Fukai-Ao |