| Reviews for Run Around In Circles |
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til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton 6/3/04 . chapter 1The last stanza is my favorite. It reflects me the most. I like it. keep writing- til-iburnout o, i'm adding you to my fav authors and this is going to my fav. stories. o and you asked if 'It Can't Be True, Can It?' and 'Her Eyes' are about the same person. Well to answer you 'Yes' they were but luckily for me the feelings have moved on from her and I've found someone who I love and not some crush. |
CL Caudle 6/2/04 . chapter 1Very nice. It perfectly describes the feeling you get when you realize that you have been running in circles, making the same mistakes over and over again. Keep writing! |
the real faith 5/28/04 . chapter 1I like it thats really true! |
Steel Winged Angel 5/26/04 . chapter 1wow. This is really beautifully written with the circles. I can relate too. BRILLIANT. Oh... you'll probably like "Rings Around the Lovers". It's a spin off of Ring Around the Rosy. Wonderful work _. |
DXM Junkie 5/23/04 . chapter 1I like the last part of this poem the best. It was awsome! |
evilcourtney 5/22/04 . chapter 1I enjoyed your poem. Nice use of rhyme and the circle theme. Also thanks for your review on my small essay 'Bush vs sexuality'. I appreciate your feedback and thank you for sharing your opinion. After all, that's what everything here is posted for. :D |