Interesting string haiku here...it would have helped to have lines separating each haiku from one another...not in between each line. I liked the last haiku...I get the same reaction too...lol. Keep up the good work.
Haiku Hunters 2004-05-21 . chapter 1
Haikus contain three lines- the first line consists of five syllables, the second of seven, and the last of five again.