I like the manner in which you chose to portray this poem. As if her descent started at the top of heaven then went slowly down to a mortal realm. You described her as we beings suppose angels look like. With mortal beauty and an innocence one only has once in life. Still your poem raises a good question do angels ever die? Will we ever find out? Are there such things as angels? A ponderous question, a poem that brings justice to question and divinity to its knees. even for a poem written at random its still good. kudos Dumon

The short lines gave the poem the feel of tumbling. Enjoyed it.

Beautiful.

This is a very good poem. I like it alot!

Interesting for something you just conjoured up.

hum very interesting !